Fun Learning - People At Home - Kids Animation Cartoon
I chose this educational video because you can learn english from a animated cartoon video!
This video teaches you what your family members are called. E.g Daddy, Mummy, Grandma e.t.c...
Good explanation. Try to remember that your language should be formal, so try and read through and find some items to correct. For example, "english" should be "English" "a animated" should be "an animated". Also, can you try and compress you writing into a single paragraph (e.g. you do not need a line break after "video!".
I chose this educational video because you can learn English from an animated cartoon video! This video teaches you what your family members are called. E.g Daddy, Mummy, Grandma e.t.c...
Good explanation. Try to remember that your language should be formal, so try and read through and find some items to correct. For example, "english" should be "English" "a animated" should be "an animated". Also, can you try and compress you writing into a single paragraph (e.g. you do not need a line break after "video!".
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